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‘Spindles and Webs’ Thread 3/4: Transformations Poems (Book 6)

3 Sep


George Braque Metamorphoses

February 2013-March 2014

17 poets, 15 months, creating 1 contemporary reworking of Ovid’s Metamorphoses

See the Transformations Page for more details or the ‘Present Collaborations’ Tab


Poems Inspired by Book 6


Carol Robson and Nat Hall



Silky Weaver

(Arachne and Minvera)

by Carol Robson


Weaver of tales
resplendently regaled
from humbleness,
interlacing her stories,
gathering her fame
in silkiness
of living threads.

Disguised challenge
old woman confronts
respect the goddess,
silky weaver
in defiance
that her substance
of threads
of weaves
are the finest
to behold.

Battles of weavers
spinning their tales,
tapestries in arrogance
silky weaver
the Gods
in weaves
of their

In ire
silky weaver
wrathful goddess,
striking silky weaver
in anger.

head hanging shame
by the weaved noose,
then in pity
of silky weaver
to poisonous
silky spinning

©Carol Robson 2013


Spinning Spirits

by Nat Hall


Inside her web of dreams,
she feels world souls
pass through

thinnest of yarn,
white filaments caress fingers
as she sits tight behind
her wheel.

She knows
the beauty of
each thread, rhythm of
her foot on treadle, the joy with which hooked flyer spins
in a rengaine…

Apparatus built for a song.

Her eyes,
drawn inside
every ounce of wool
she washed & brushed with
so much care
now looks
fine silk;

she does not
listen to
wind that
filters through
the wooden frame of
her own gift…

For days on end,
she simply stops to
watch the clock,
as spinning

She does not know,
she will be punished for
her deed, as jealous
hands are told to
turn her
her abdomen
became her wheel.

© Nat Hall 2013

Inspired from the tale of Arachne & Minerva



You can find out more about Carol and Nat here: 




‘Heralding Battle and Blood’ Slash 3/4: Transformations Poems (Book 5)

31 Jul


George Braque Metamorphoses

February 2013-March 2014

17 poets, 15 months, creating 1 contemporary reworking of Ovid’s Metamorphoses

See the Transformations Page for more details or the ‘Present Collaborations’ Tab


Poems Inspired by Book 5



Nat Hall and James Knight


The Plough

by Nat Hall


Follow furrows.


In the lush land slashed by the plough of those who sow pardon’s poppies

instead of pale forget-me-not,

I jeer

and hiss at

Minerva & beg to drink

at the fountain;


in the great land slashed by the plough of those who glean ripe seeds

of love instead of harm,

I say


of nine magpies;


in the dark land slashed by the plough of those who seek the reaper’s

hand instead of rags,

I crouch and

curse at

Medusa, bow to

the god of the river and find

my way with Pegasus.

In the proud land slashed by the plough of those who unleash dogs

of war, I raise my pavilion of grace,

woven through air as a




myself with fire,

as life throws her cargo of death –


in between blades & nine magpies,

there is a hill where wild orchids flourish in peace,

where love & hate flower as flax,

from which farmers

turn to linen.


Is there a womb where the living calls to the dead?


I am walking in its furrow.

© Nat Hall 2013


The guilty statue

by James Knight


stories lodged in minds like splinters stories dreamt imagined inferred told retold their loose machinery humming in the night of a thousand insomnias stories growing bacterial on petri dish pages blooming in blue green patina of myth stories whispering to us under the lid of day from the edges of vision and reason while we iron trousers and go deaf with talking and buy into bankrupt ideas stories incessant unrelenting a heartbeat a breathing low inaudible easily ignored most of the time

until they burst



victorious with his prize


What, won’t you come out,


and have a good dinner for nothing?


Much obliged, Mr. Ketch,

(the Tyburn Gardener represents the throne, for the

purposes of this allegory)

but I have had my dinner

for nothing already.


But you must come out;

the haughty tyrant speaks –

come out and be hanged.


sometimes a story is Medusa

lifted high,

a head

on the spike of an arm




yes, the story

the story itself,

its telling


Gorgon’s head appears


Why were you so cruel

as to commit so many



the monster held

And you’ve got one bone

in your neck,

but that shall be soon



It is very easy:

only put your head

through here.


Insert here your own list of historical events which you would classify as atrocities, events that turned viewers to stone


What, so?

Not so, you fool.


Mind who you call fool:

try if you can do it yourself.

Only show me how,

and I do it directly.


soon were statues


to Seriphus with the head he sails

Lord of a little isle


the telling defines us

so we have to be very careful


Very well; I will.

There, you see

my head,

and you see

this loop:

put it in,



shut your eyes,

he cries


And pull it tight, so!


I’ve done the trick!

Jack Ketch is dead –

I’m free!


Discuss the view that discourse diminishes reality.


That’s not what I said, you fucking idiot!


A severed head might represent a multitude of things, for example anarchy (removal of the head of state), madness (loss of reason), castration anxiety


Medusa’s snakes


let the story hiss you, kiss you, atishoo!

we all fall down

folly in the stone.



You can find out more about Nat and James and their work here:


Nat Hall




James Knight





Metamorphoses Book 6 Overview and Prompts: Transformations Collaborative Poetry Project

19 Jun
George Braque Metamorphoses

George Braque Metamorphoses


Started in February 2013, 17 poets, 15 months,  creating 1 contemporary reworking of Ovid‘s Metamorphoses

See the Transformations Page For More Details

Here we are in the middle of June with our deadline of Book 5 poetry being Thursday 27th June. It comes around quickly!

This post sets out to provide an overview of Book 6 with a deadline for the poems inspired by that book being Wednesday 31st July. The second  batch of Book 4 poems went out yesterday and Book 4 poems will be posted out for the rest of this month.

If you missed out on Book 3 poems you can find them here, here, here and here. I’ve also created a ‘Transformations Poems Tab’ on the site menu for ease of access.

Please not that from now on I will combine the overview post with the prompt, deadline and optional verse form post. This seems to make more sense and keeps it all in one place.

Overview of Book 6: 


The_SpinnersDiego_Velazquez_014 Arachne and Minerva

Pallas [Minerva] had listened to the tale she told

With warm approval of the Muses’song

And of their righteous rage. Then to herself-

To praise is not enough; I should have praise

Myself, not suffer my divinity

To be despised unscathed’. 


Book 6 is subtly connected to book five by the theme of contest/war/conflict. It also significantly drives the subject matter and thought of the previous books in a different direction. Ovid turns the placid goddess Minerva on her head and transforms her into a punishing deity who chastises  a mortal just for her gift of creating magnificent tapestries and for being proud of that fact. Ovid transforms  a seemingly slight tale into a story of conflict between two master weavers who both imbue  their work with their world view and biases. Indeed, the tapestry that Arachne  (a girl  of humble origins with amazing weaving skills) creates is used to  embody the themes of books 1-3 in its skeins. Ovid uses this scenario to  challenge the power of the gods; perhaps, suggesting their influence should be taken lightly.

Book 6 also has the tale of Niobe (Queen of Thebes and wife of Amphion) which embodies an important principle of Greek thinking- ‘that one must not tempt the gods by boasting of luck, good fortune or happiness’ (Brunauer: 64). Importantly, it is also in Book 6 that the epic crucially goes in a different direction:  away from the subject of mortals challenging gods towards a story of  ‘human lust’, brutality, and bloody vengeance within families’ (William S. Anderson in Brunauer: 64). The first part of the poem in Book 6 focuses on the Gods and the second part on mortal men and women.

Summary of the Tales in Book 6 

The Myths and Key Characters: Arachne; Niobe; The Lycian Peasants; Marsyas;  Pelops; Procne and Philomela; Boreas and Orithyia



The goddess Minerva/Pallas disguises herself as an old woman in order to punish a young girl (Arachne) for boasting about her skills at weaving. Arachne refuses to pay any heed to what Minerva says. In order to undermine Arachne’s refutation Minerva reveals herself as a goddess but Arachne still refuses to listen challenging her to a weaving contest. They both produce phenomenal pieces . Minerva’s tapestry represents her win over Neptune’s (Roman God of freshwater) patronage over the city of Athens and the folly of mortals who challenge the gods’ power. In contrast, Arachne chooses to depict the way the god’s play with the lives of mortal girls. She particularly highlights Jove (Lord of Heaven). Minerva realises Arachne’s work is exceptional and batters her viciously and this so traumatises Arachne she tries to hang herself. Minerva takes pity on her and lets her live but transforms her into a spider.




Niobe (Queen of Thebes, mother of 7 sons and 7 daughters)  tragically offends nymph Latona (Mother of Apollo and Diana) by thinking the thought that she was the’ happiest of mothers’. Latona calls upon her divine children to exact vengeance on Niobe by killing all her family with her children’s arrows. Grief-stricken at her children’s death she turns into stone. This transformation occurred in order to remind other mortals what can happen when mortal boasting affects Gods.

The Lycian Peasents:

An unnamed narrator now  tells the story of nymph Latona. The importance of this story becomes apparent when read in sequence with the Niobe story as their arrangement is part of the particular tapestry Ovid is creating. In this story Latona is driven into exile  by Juno (Queen of Heaven). Thirsty and unable to breast feed her children Lacona tries to drink from a village pond but is harassed by some villagers and she turns them into frogs out of vengeance. Ovid foregrounds the injustice of Latona’s treatment and the nastiness of the local’s behaviour. To turn them into frogs does not seem harsh enough he seems to suggest. The story acts as an example of how context shapes the nature of what is right and wrong and how this shapes meaning.



This story also presents us with a contest- a contest between artists and the punishment that results from it.  Marsayas (a satyr) is skinned alive for threatening Apollo in a music competition and not winning.  Here we have another example of an artist being punished for their art.  The tale is gruesome but it is butted up against a pastoral depiction of sadness at Marsayas’  fate.  The  tears of Marsayas’ kinsfolk  turning the blood of Marsayas into a river of the same name.   Despite Marsaya’s challenge to authority, and because of his punishment, he gains notoriety and fame and his art goes on forever.

Procne and Philomela

Tereus, Procne Philomela

The Lycian storytellers continue to tell a sequence of other stories which represent blasphemies in history. The tale of Tereus (King of Thrace)  is retold. The king who sent his army to aid Athens against a barbarian invasion. Out of gratitude Tereus is offered the daughter of Pandion (King of Athens)-  Procne as his wife. Procne asks Tereus if her sister Philomela can visit, he agrees but when he collects her he  is overcome with passion for her and he incestuously rapes her (some critics have seen this section as pornographic Liveley: 74). Philomela threatens to reveal his crime to Procne her sister. In order to prevent this happening Tereus cuts out her tongue and repeatedly rapes her. He leaves her abandoned and lies about why she has not returned with him.

However Philomela manages to get a message to her sister who swears vengeance on Tereus. During an orgy for Bacchus Philomela disguises Procne and removes her from Tereus’ clutches. In punishment for Tereus’ behaviour she serves him his own son in a meal. The two sisters afraid of Tereus’ rage flee and are turned into birds. Tereus is himself transformed into a hoopoe.

Boreas and Orithyia

Pandion (the father of Phiolmela and Procne) is heartbroken at the loss of his daughters. He recounts the story of the rape of his granddaughter Orithya  (daughter of Erechtheus) by Boreas (the North wind) who abducts her. Pandion goes in to decline and his throne is taken by Erechtheus. In this tale we see Erechtheus’ children grow into manhood, take wives and sail in the ship Argo across the seas in search of  The Golden Fleece. The story of their search is split between Book 6 and 7.

Themes, Analysis and Relevance

Here are some of the primary themes that run through Book 6:

  • The nature of right and wrong in relation to context and circumstance (e.g. Niobe). The first half of Book 6 flagging up the state of the Gods and the second mortal man.
  • Punishment: being punished for your art and how art can be seen as a way of immortalising yourself through time. The story of Marsayas highlights this.
  • Violence and Rape, the cruelty and horror of extreme violence. This is particularly exemplified by the story of Philomela and Procne.
  • Silence and Speech- and the impact either ‘withholding’ or ‘speaking out’  has; i.e. the ramifications of sticking up for yourself. An example of this again being Procne and Philomela.

Things of Interest: 


T.S Eliot


T.S Eliot’s poem The Wasteland makes reference to the tale of Phiolmela:

Lines 97-103:

Above the antique mantel was displayed
As though a window gave upon the sylvan scene
The change of Philomel, by the barbarous king
So rudely forced; yet there the nightingale
Filled all the desert with inviolable voice
And still she cried, and still the world pursues,
“Jug Jug” to dirty ears.

Eliot’s Note:

99. V. Ovid, Metamorphoses, VI, Philomela.
Images from this story recur throughout the poem. In his note for line 100, Eliot directs us to an echo of the Philomela story in Part III. The swallow appears again at the end of the poem.

Optional Prompts and Verse Form

Prompts: Bridge, Absorb, Accident, Fantasy, Eclipse, Playful, Truth, Dazzle, Bed, Steam, Argue , Inversion, Golden.

Verse Form: Rhyme Royal – sometimes known as the Troilus stanza – has 7 lines of 10 syllables each (normally iambic pentameters) and a rhyming scheme of ababbcc.


See here for more information.

Here’s an  audio of the tale of ‘Marsayas’ in case any of you are too busy to read the book:



Watch out for more poetry inspired by book 4 coming out throughout June.

To confirm: the deadline for Book 6 Poetry is Wednesday 31st July  





Brunauer, Dalma H (1996) The Metamorphoses of Ovid, New Jersey Research and Education Association

Hughes, T (1997) Tales from Ovid, London: Faber and Faber

Liveley, G. (2011) Ovid’s Metamorphoses, A Reader’s Guide,  London: continuum

Ovid (1986) Metamorphoses, World Classics, tr. A.D. Melville, Oxford: Oxford University Press





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